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Semper Sursum .:personal:.

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Some art of Stellar Infinitum! 
gosh they are so much fun to manip. even if they are a apin

i forgot the light filaments. but i'll add them soon

Big Rock by BurtnFR Standing proud facing away by Chunga-StockSky 3  stock by zummerfishGreen Valley by Burtn

everything else (c) EquineLullaby
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
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Hey there!

So this caught my eye while I was just scrolling about and thought I'd take a look <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I must say, I love this!!! I'm not gonna do this whole star this half star that simply because I like it, and that's all lolz.

Anyways I do have some pointers and I hope they're understandable <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I would place him further up on the cliff and here's why. You have that area that is simply doing nothing. It's just...there and the eye tends to go to that spot because it thinks there should be something there. Putting the horse just slightly further up, will draw the eye directly to the horse <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I dunno what the animal's actual antlers look like (I can't find em!!!) But these kind of look too rounded, but that could be the way the antlers on this horse are meant to be and if so, cool! If not, I'd add a bit of a pointer point.

Where the (I call it fox fire) is, I'd set it just slightly further up to where it's a lil more visible. But if that was your intention, then cool <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

The shadow on the ground is perfect, but I'd make it slightly darker. Not dark enough to take away from the cliff's detailing though! My advice, if you stand outside on a moon lit night, take a look at the shadow you create. It's usually darker then the area around you.

Altogether, I love this piece! The horse look magical and I think that's what you were going for <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>