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WIP manip two!

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please critique!
(mane isnt red, thats just the sketch)
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1687x1549px 4.9 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First of all, WOW!!! Massive improvement. That hair on the White pony is pretty much faultless, so soft but still shows the strands. I really, Really love that crack on the White pony too, so effective and adds to originality. The grounding of it too is so good. I love it. Maybe it's eyes could stand out a bit more, unless this is what you were going for. The lighting is beautiful and knowing that the black horse isn't finished, maybe not as dark of lighting for it considering it's a soft background. The sketch of the hair on the black horse shows great movement, and suits the position. And also maybe make it's eye stand out too, again unless it's what you were going for.